How to title an essay: formulas, examples and capitalization

Write the essay first, then build the title from your thesis. Eight formulas, original examples by essay type, and APA, MLA and Chicago capitalization rules.

By Strokes Team · · Students · 10 min read

Key takeaways

  • Title the essay after you finish the draft. Underline the nouns and verbs that carry the thesis and the conclusion, then write ten versions in different shapes before judging any.
  • The two-part shape works because each half does one job: a hook before the colon, then the subject stated plainly so a reader who misses the hook still knows the topic.
  • The styles split on prepositions: APA capitalizes any word of four letters or more, MLA lowercases them all, and Chicago capitalizes those of five letters or more.
  • Your own title gets no quotation marks, italics or final period, and is bold only in APA. Titles of other works inside it keep their italics or quotation marks.
A paper-craft desk in blue and cream, an open book of text lines, a tray of cut-out label shapes, and a hand holding one framed title card above the page while other candidate labels float around it with arrows pointing in.
The title is easiest to write once the thesis exists. Most of the words it needs are already in that sentence.
On this page
  1. What a good essay title does
  2. Essay title formulas, with examples
  3. Titles for different types of essays
  4. How to come up with a title, step by step
  5. Capitalization: APA, MLA and Chicago
  6. Common essay title mistakes
  7. Drafting titles in Strokes
  8. Frequently asked questions

Title your essay after you finish the draft. Take the key words from your thesis, name the specific subject (the novel, the policy, the town), and choose a shape: a plain statement of your claim, a question the essay answers, or a two-part title with a short hook before the colon and the precise topic after it. Then format it for your class: title case, centered, no quotation marks or italics, no final period. In APA, the title is also bold.

What a good essay title does

A title has three jobs. It names the subject closely enough that the reader knows what is coming. It signals the position you take or the question you are asking. And it sets a tone that matches the essay: a personal essay can be quiet and concrete, an argumentative one should sound like it has a claim to defend.

Your instructor reads the title before the first sentence. A title that could sit on top of thirty other essays in the stack tells them you have not yet decided what yours is about. A title that could only belong to your essay tells them you have.

One essay, five titles
  1. English Essay 3
    A label. It says which assignment, not which essay.
  2. Social Media
    A topic, and far too broad for 1,500 words.
  3. Social Media and Teenagers
    Two topics, and no hint of how they connect.
  4. How Group Chats Changed the Way Teenagers Argue
    A specific subject and a claim. Good enough for most class essays.
  5. Left on Read: How Group Chats Changed the Way Teenagers Argue
    The same claim with a hook. It earns its place if the essay actually discusses unanswered messages.
Original example. Each line is a revision of the one above it.

Essay title formulas, with examples

A formula is a shape to fill, not a finished title. Fill the brackets with the most specific words from your draft: a name instead of "people", a place instead of "society", the actual effect instead of "effects". All examples here are original, and none uses a preposition of four letters or more, so each is capitalized the same way in APA, MLA and Chicago.

FormulaExampleGood for
Formula[Hook]: [specific topic and claim]ExampleLeft on Read: How Group Chats Changed the Way Teenagers ArgueGood forAlmost any essay
Formula[Your claim, stated plainly]ExampleLater School Start Times Are a Safety MeasureGood forArgumentative, persuasive
Formula[The question your essay answers]ExampleWho Pays When the Library Closes on Sundays?Good forResearch, expository
FormulaHow or Why [specific thing happens]ExampleWhy Victor Frankenstein Never Names His CreatureGood forLiterary analysis
Formula“[Quotation from the text]”: [topic] in [work]Example“A Truth Universally Acknowledged”: Money and Marriage in Pride and PrejudiceGood forLiterary analysis
Formula[Thing A] and [Thing B]: [what the pair reveals]ExamplePaper Maps and Blue Dots: What Navigation Apps Do to Our Sense of PlaceGood forCompare and contrast
Formula[A concrete image from your story]ExampleThe Summer I Drove the Milk TruckGood forNarrative, personal, reflective
Formula[Familiar phrase, turned]: [topic]ExampleBreaking the Fast: What Skipping Breakfast Does to Test ScoresGood forLighter topics, sparingly

The hook-and-colon shape works so often because each half does one job. The part before the colon can be a striking phrase from your evidence, a pairing built on juxtaposition, or a short quotation. The part after the colon names the subject plainly, so a reader who does not get the hook still knows what the essay covers. A quotation title works like a one-line epigraph: quote a phrase the essay actually analyzes, keep it short, and copy it exactly.

Puns are the riskiest formula. They work when the wordplay points at your argument and the subtitle explains it. They fail when the joke is the only idea in the title, or when the topic is serious and the pun makes it sound flippant.

Titles for different types of essays

What the title should signal depends on the kind of essay. An argumentative essay needs your position in it. A narrative essay usually reads better with an image than with the lesson spelled out.

Essay typeThe title should signalExample
Essay typeArgumentativeThe title should signalYour position, not just the topicExampleParking Minimums Make Housing More Expensive
Essay typeExpositoryThe title should signalThe subject and the process or angle you explainExampleHow a Bill Dies in Committee
Essay typeLiterary analysisThe title should signalThe work and your reading of itExampleThe Locked Room: Secrecy and Shame in Jane Eyre
Essay typeCompare and contrastThe title should signalBoth subjects and the point of comparing themExampleTwo Kinds of Ambition: Macbeth and Victor Frankenstein
Essay typeRhetorical analysisThe title should signalThe text and the move you analyzeExampleUnfinished Work: How the Gettysburg Address Recasts the War's Purpose
Essay typeNarrative or personalThe title should signalA person, place or moment, not the moralExampleThe Night Shift at Rosa's Bakery
Essay typeReflectiveThe title should signalThe experience and what it changedExampleLearning to Say “I Don't Know”: A Year of Peer Tutoring
Essay typeResearch paperThe title should signalThe exact scope; a subtitle is normalExampleClicking “Agree”: How Teenagers Read Privacy Policies in Free Mobile Games

Application essays are the exception. Many portals give you a text box with no title field, and a title there is optional. If you add one, keep it short and concrete, and check whether the portal counts it toward the word limit.

How to come up with a title, step by step

  1. Use a working title while you draft

    Give the file a plain working title such as "group chats and arguing" and move on. It keeps you on topic without stealing time from the argument. If you started from an essay outline, your thesis is already sitting at the top of it.

  2. Mine your thesis and conclusion

    Copy your thesis below the draft and underline the nouns and verbs that carry the argument. Read your conclusion too. It often states the point more sharply than the introduction, because by the time you wrote it you knew what you thought.

  3. Write ten versions in different shapes

    Use the formulas: one statement, one question, one two-part title, one with a phrase from your evidence. Do not judge them yet. The first few will be labels. The useful ones tend to come once the obvious words are used up.

  4. Make every word specific

    Replace "society" with who, "effects" with which effect, "literature" with the book. Cut openers like "An Analysis of", "A Look at" and "Essay on". APA's guidance asks for titles without abbreviations or words that serve no purpose, and that is good advice in any style.

  5. Test it on a reader

    Show a classmate only the title and ask what they think the essay argues. If they cannot guess the topic, it is too clever. If they cannot guess your position, the subtitle needs work. Then read the title with your first paragraph: the opening hook should add something, not repeat the title word for word.

Capitalization: APA, MLA and Chicago

All three major styles put essay titles in title case. Capitalize the first word, the first word after a colon, and every major word: nouns, pronouns, verbs (including short ones like Is and Be), adjectives and adverbs. The styles split on short words, mostly prepositions, so check which style guide your class uses.

WordAPA (7th ed.)MLA (9th ed.)Chicago (18th ed.)
WordFirst word of the title or subtitleAPA (7th ed.)CapitalizeMLA (9th ed.)CapitalizeChicago (18th ed.)Capitalize
WordNouns, pronouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbsAPA (7th ed.)CapitalizeMLA (9th ed.)CapitalizeChicago (18th ed.)Capitalize
Worda, an, theAPA (7th ed.)LowercaseMLA (9th ed.)LowercaseChicago (18th ed.)Lowercase
Wordand, but, orAPA (7th ed.)LowercaseMLA (9th ed.)LowercaseChicago (18th ed.)Lowercase
WordShort prepositions: in, of, on, to, forAPA (7th ed.)LowercaseMLA (9th ed.)LowercaseChicago (18th ed.)Lowercase
WordFour-letter prepositions: with, from, intoAPA (7th ed.)CapitalizeMLA (9th ed.)LowercaseChicago (18th ed.)Lowercase
WordLonger prepositions: about, after, betweenAPA (7th ed.)CapitalizeMLA (9th ed.)LowercaseChicago (18th ed.)Capitalize
APA capitalizes every word of four letters or more. MLA lowercases prepositions of any length. Chicago capitalizes prepositions of five letters or more, a change in its 18th edition.
One title in each style
  • APA: Learning With Our Hands: The Case for Shop Class After Middle School
  • MLA: Learning with Our Hands: The Case for Shop Class after Middle School
  • Chicago: Learning with Our Hands: The Case for Shop Class After Middle School
  • Sentence case, if your instructor asks for it: Learning with our hands: The case for shop class after middle school
Original example. The styles disagree on the four-letter with and the five-letter after.

Titles of other works inside your title

Format a title inside your title exactly as you would in the body of the essay. Italicize books, plays, films and periodicals. Put poems, short stories, articles and chapters in quotation marks. For example: Saying No: Refusal in “Bartleby, the Scrivener” and Jane Eyre. Your own title gets neither treatment.

Where the title goes on the page

StyleTitle pageHow the title looks
StyleMLATitle pageNone unless your instructor asks. The title is centered on page 1, under the header with your name, instructor, course and dateHow the title looksTitle case, plain text: no bold, italics, underlining or quotation marks
StyleAPATitle pageYes. Centered, three or four lines below the top of the page, then repeated at the top of the first page of textHow the title looksTitle case, bold
StyleChicagoTitle pageUsually. Centered about a third of the way down the page, with a subtitle on the next line after the colonHow the title looksHeadline-style title case

Common essay title mistakes

Most weak titles fail in one of a few ways: they label instead of tell, repeat the prompt, or promise more than the essay delivers.

WeakBetterThe fix
WeakEnglish Essay #2BetterWhy Victor Frankenstein Never Names His CreatureThe fixNames the subject and the question
WeakFrankensteinBetterThe Creature Learns to Read: Education in FrankensteinThe fixYour title, not the book's
WeakCompare and Contrast Two Characters in MacbethBetterTwo Kinds of Guilt: Macbeth and Lady MacbethThe fixAnswers the prompt instead of repeating it
WeakClimate ChangeBetterRising Water, Rising Rent: Flood Risk and Housing in Coastal TownsThe fixNarrows a topic to an argument
WeakAn Analysis of the Effects of Social Media on SocietyBetterHow Group Chats Changed the Way Teenagers ArgueThe fixCuts filler and vague nouns
WeakYou Won't Believe What This Poem Is Really AboutBetter“Nevermore” as an Answer: Despair in “The Raven”The fixStates the reading instead of teasing it
WeakTHE CASE FOR LATER SCHOOL START TIMES.BetterThe Case for Later School Start TimesThe fixTitle case, no final period

One more test catches the subtle version of the last mistake: does the essay deliver everything the title promises? A title that says "Why Schools Should Ban Phones" sets up a policy argument. If the essay mostly describes how students use phones, either the title or the essay needs to change, and it is usually faster to change the title.

Drafting titles in Strokes

Titles are easier to judge in a list, so keep your candidates at the top of the draft and delete the losers before you submit. In Strokes, select a candidate and press ⌘K to ask for a change in place, such as "more specific, under ten words, keep the novel's title". The AI Assistant opens beside the document and can read the whole essay, so you can ask whether your title promises more than the essay argues. Check your course's policy on AI help first, and treat any suggestion as raw material. Version history keeps earlier drafts if you change your mind overnight, and the finished essay exports to Word or PDF for submission.

Frequently asked questions

Does an essay need a title?

Most class essays do, and the MLA, APA and Chicago formats all include one. Timed exams and some application portals are exceptions: if the form has no title field, a title is optional. When the assignment does not say, add one.

Should an essay title be bold, italicized or in quotation marks?

Never italicized or in quotation marks. In MLA it is plain text. In APA it is bold, both on the title page and at the top of the first page of text. Only the titles of other works inside your title get italics or quotation marks.

How long should an essay title be?

Neither MLA nor APA sets a word count. APA asks for a focused, succinct title without abbreviations or words that serve no purpose. For a class essay, aim for one line. A two-part research title can run to two.

Which words are not capitalized in an essay title?

In APA, MLA and Chicago, lowercase a, an and the, short prepositions such as in, of, on and to, and the conjunctions and, but and or, unless the word starts the title or the subtitle. APA capitalizes every word of four letters or more, MLA lowercases prepositions of any length, and Chicago capitalizes prepositions of five letters or more.

Can an essay title be a question?

Yes, if the essay answers it. Questions suit research and expository essays. Avoid questions with an obvious yes or no answer, and end the title with a question mark, not a period.

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