How to get a literary agent, from finished draft to offer

Finish the book, find literary agents who sell your genre, query in small batches and handle the offer call. Every step, with sample emails and red flags.

By Strokes Team · · Publishing · 11 min read

Key takeaways

  • Query a novel only once the manuscript is complete and revised. Nonfiction usually sells on a proposal with sample chapters, but debut memoirists are often asked for the full book.
  • Pick agents by evidence they want books like yours: recent sales in your category, a matching wish list, or a thank-you in a comp title's acknowledgments.
  • Send five to ten queries at a time. No requests from a batch means rewrite the letter. Requests that end in passes mean look at the opening pages or the book.
  • A legitimate agent earns only a commission, typically 15% on US sales and 20% on foreign rights. Any fee to read, evaluate or sign you is a red flag.
A writer in a dark coat with a leather satchel and a manuscript under one arm, seen from behind, knocking on a green front door with a brass plate that reads Literary Agent, a lamplit study with bookshelves in the window beside it.
Queries go out in small batches, one door at a time. It takes one yes.
On this page
  1. What a literary agent does
  2. How to get a literary agent, step by step
  3. Where to find literary agents
  4. What goes in the submission package
  5. Tracking, response times and nudges
  6. The call and the offer
  7. Red flags: fees and fake agents
  8. Querying mistakes that cost requests
  9. Frequently asked questions

To get a literary agent, finish and revise your book first (for a novel, the complete manuscript). Then build a list of agents who represent your genre and have recently sold books like yours, and send each one the query package their guidelines ask for, five to ten at a time. Cold queries work: agents find many debut clients in their slush pile. A legitimate agent is paid only a commission on what your book earns, so you never pay one to read your work or sign you.

What a literary agent does

An agent sells your book to publishers and runs the business around it. Many give editorial notes before submission. Then they pitch editors they know, run the submission (and an auction if several houses want the book), negotiate the contract, and sell the rights the publisher does not buy, such as translation, audio and film. Afterward they collect your payments and advise on the next book.

Agents work on commission. The publisher pays the agency, which deducts its share and forwards the rest to you, so the agent earns nothing until you do. The rates below are common practice, not law. The agency agreement you are offered sets the real numbers.

IncomeTypical commissionNote
IncomeUS advance and royaltiesTypical commission15%NoteThe most consistent rate
IncomeForeign and translation rightsTypical commission20%NoteOften shared with a co-agent abroad
IncomeFilm and TV rightsTypical commission15–20%NoteVaries; often via a co-agent
IncomeReading or signing feesTypical commissionNoneNoteAALA members may not charge reading fees
Common US agency commissions. Check the agreement you are offered.

Do you need a literary agent?

You need one to sell to the largest publishers. The Big Five (Penguin Random House, HarperCollins, Simon & Schuster, Hachette and Macmillan) and most of their imprints rarely accept unagented submissions, apart from occasional open windows and invitations from editors met at conferences. Many small, independent and university presses accept submissions directly from authors, and self-publishing needs no agent at all. Without an agent you negotiate the contract yourself, so have someone who knows publishing contracts read it.

How to get a literary agent, step by step

  1. Finish and revise the book

    For fiction, query only a complete, revised manuscript: an agent who likes your opening will ask for the whole book. Revise with notes from a few beta readers first.

    Nonfiction usually sells on a book proposal with sample chapters. Debut memoirists are often asked for the full manuscript.

  2. Write the submission materials

    Draft the query letter, a synopsis, a one-line logline and two or three comparable titles, and polish your first pages until they are the best in the book. Set the manuscript in standard manuscript format so it is ready the day someone asks for it.

  3. Research agents who fit

    Find agents who represent your category and have sold comparable books recently. Record their guidelines as you go.

  4. Build a tiered list

    Sort the list into strong fits, good fits and possible fits. Many agencies ask you to query one of their agents at a time, and some treat a pass from one as a pass from all, so note each agency's policy.

  5. Query the first batch

    Send five to ten queries, mixing a few top choices with strong fits, so a letter that is not working yet does not use up every favorite. Follow each agent's guidelines exactly.

  6. Track, wait and adjust

    Log every query. If a batch brings no requests, rewrite the query letter. If agents request pages and then pass, look at the opening or the book itself before the next batch.

  7. Take the call and manage the offer

    When an agent offers, ask your questions, ask for time, and tell every agent still reading your work before you decide.

Where to find literary agents

You want agents with evidence that they want books like yours: recent sales in your category, a stated wish that matches, or both.

  • Acknowledgments pages. Pick ten recent books your ideal reader also loved (the best of them become your comp titles). Authors usually thank their agent by name in the acknowledgments.
  • QueryTracker. A free database of agents with genres, guideline links, open or closed status, typical response times and a log for your queries. A paid Premium tier adds more detailed query data and timelines. Many agents take queries through QueryManager, a form run by the same team.
  • Publishers Marketplace. A paid subscription whose deals database shows which agent sold which book to which editor, and when.
  • Manuscript Wish List. The website and the #MSWL hashtag, where agents and editors describe the books they are looking for. Writers search it but do not post to it.
  • Conferences and referrals. Many writers' conferences sell short pitch sessions with agents, and a writer friend who has read your book can mention it to their own agent. Either way, the agent will usually ask you to send a query and pages, so have the package ready.
  • Agency websites. The final word on who is open to queries, what each agent represents and how to submit. Interviews and podcast appearances fill in taste.
  • Verification. The member directory of the Association of American Literary Agents (AALA, formerly the Association of Authors' Representatives, or AAR) and Writer Beware, which tracks scams aimed at writers. AALA membership is voluntary, so a missing name is not a warning on its own.

What to record for each agent

Write a short note for each agent before you query. It forces you to check the fit, and it gives you the one honest line of personalization a query can carry.

Agent research note

Agent: [Name], [Agency]. Open to queries, checked [date].

Represents: Upmarket and historical fiction, some narrative nonfiction. Not fantasy or picture books.

Evidence of fit: Thanked in the acknowledgments of [comp title]. A [year] deal for [a similar book] on Publishers Marketplace.

Wish list: Dual-timeline family stories; novels set in working towns (agency page).

Submission: QueryManager form. Query, synopsis and first 10 pages. No reply after 8 weeks means no.

Personal line: “Your wish list mentions dual-timeline family stories, so I hope [Title] is a fit.”

Status: Queried [date]. Full requested [date].

A sample format. Fill one in per agent from the agency page, deal listings and wish list.

What goes in the submission package

Every agent sets their own requirements, so send exactly what each one asks for. These are the usual pieces:

PieceWhat it isTypical length
PieceQuery letterWhat it isThe pitch, the title, genre, word count, comps and a short bioTypical lengthAbout 250–350 words; one page
PieceSynopsisWhat it isThe whole plot, ending includedTypical lengthOften one to two pages
PieceSample pagesWhat it isYour opening, from page oneTypical lengthFirst 5, 10, 25 or 50 pages, or three chapters
PieceProposal (nonfiction)What it isOverview, market, platform, chapter outline, sample chaptersTypical lengthSet by the agent
Send only what each agent's guidelines ask for, at the length they give.
  • When the guidelines say to paste pages into the email, paste them below the query. Many agents do not open attachments.
  • Sample pages always start at page one, never at your favorite chapter.
  • Use the subject line the agent asks for. If none is given, something like “Query: [TITLE], [genre]” is clear.

For the letter itself, see how to write a query letter or start from the query letter template. For the plot summary, see how to write a synopsis.

Tracking, response times and nudges

Querying runs on long silences, so keep a log from the first day: who, when, what you sent, their response window and the outcome.

AgentSentWindowStatus
Agent[Agent A], [Agency 1]SentMar 3Window8 weeks; no reply = noStatusFull requested Mar 20
Agent[Agent B], [Agency 2]SentMar 3Window6–8 weeksStatusPass, form letter, Mar 11
Agent[Agent C], [Agency 3]SentMar 4Window12 weeksStatusWaiting
Agent[Agent D], [Agency 4]SentMar 5WindowReplies to allStatusPartial requested Apr 2
A query log: one row per agent, updated the day anything changes.

Many agents answer queries within four to eight weeks, and others take three months or more. Many follow a “no response means no” policy, so silence after their stated window is a pass. Full manuscripts take longer, often two to three months.

Do not nudge on a query unless the guidelines invite it. Do nudge on a full manuscript once the agent's stated window has passed (about three months if none is given): a few lines, in the original email thread. One more check a month later is plenty.

Nudge on a full manuscript

Subject: Re: Full manuscript: [TITLE]

Dear [Agent name],

I hope you are well. I'm following up on the full manuscript of [TITLE], which I sent on [date] at your request. I'm still very interested in working with you and would be glad to hear where it stands when you have a moment.

Best wishes,
[Your name]

Keep the querying files together

Querying produces paperwork: the manuscript, several versions of the query, a synopsis, research notes and the log. Keep it in one project folder per book. In Strokes, a project holds the chapters as documents beside the query materials, and saving a version of the letter before each batch shows exactly what each agent received. Export to Word or PDF covers agents who want an attachment. You can also add an agent's guidelines and your query to an AI Assistant chat and ask what is missing, then check its answer against the guidelines yourself.

The call and the offer

An offer usually starts with an email asking to set up a call. The call runs both ways: the agent wants to know you can revise and keep writing, and you want to know how they would sell this book and look after your career. Write your questions down.

Do not accept on the call. Agree a date for your answer, then email every agent who still has your query or manuscript, including anyone who asked for a revise and resubmit. One to two weeks is a common window. Never invent an offer to hurry agents along.

Offer notification email

Subject: Offer of representation: [TITLE]

Dear [Agent name],

I queried you on [date] with [TITLE], a [genre] novel complete at [word count] words. I have received an offer of representation and will make my decision by [date, one to two weeks out]. If you would like to consider the manuscript before then, I'd be glad to send it right away.

Thank you for your time,
[Your name]

To an agent who already has the full manuscript, ask instead whether they can reply by [date].

When you decide, send a warm yes to your choice and a short, gracious note to the rest. Read the agency agreement before you sign: many let either side end it with written notice (30 days is common), and the agent keeps earning commission on deals they made.

Red flags: fees and fake agents

Money flows from the publisher to the agent to you, never from you to the agent upfront. The AALA's Canon of Ethics bars members from charging reading fees and from making representation depend on the author paying them for editorial or other services.

Normal

  • Paid only by commission, deducted from what the publisher pays
  • Recent deals and clients you can confirm
  • A written agreement covering commission, term and termination
  • Any expenses listed in the agreement and taken from earnings, not billed upfront
  • Time to think and to notify other agents

Red flag

  • A fee to read, evaluate, submit or list your book
  • An offer that depends on paying for editing, marketing or a website
  • No sales you can verify, or vague credentials
  • An unsolicited message offering to represent a book you never queried
  • Pressure to sign today, or an email address that only resembles a real agent's

Querying mistakes that cost requests

  • Querying a draft. A pass is usually final for that project, so do not spend agents on an unrevised book.
  • One package for everyone. Ignoring an agent's page count or attachment rule reads as not having looked.
  • Sending the whole list at once. You lose the chance to fix a letter that is not working.
  • Stale or giant comps. Agents generally prefer books from the last few years over classics and mega-bestsellers.
  • Arguing with a rejection. Thank the agent or say nothing.

Frequently asked questions

How long does it take to get a literary agent?

There is no standard timeline. Each batch takes one to three months to resolve, since many agents answer queries in four to eight weeks and take longer over full manuscripts. Many writers query for months, and some query more than one book.

Do I need a literary agent to get published?

Only for the largest publishers: the Big Five and most of their imprints rarely accept unagented submissions. Many small, independent and university presses accept authors directly, and self-publishing needs no agent.

How much does a literary agent cost?

Nothing upfront. Agents take a commission from what your book earns, typically 15% of US advances and royalties and about 20% of foreign sales. An agent who charges a reading, evaluation or signing fee is a red flag.

How many agents should I query?

Query in batches of five to ten and keep going while requests come in. If ten or more queries bring no requests, rework the query letter. If full manuscripts come back as passes, look at the opening pages or the book.

Can I query agents with an unfinished novel?

No. Agents sign novels on a complete, revised manuscript, because they will ask to read all of it. Nonfiction usually sells on a proposal with sample chapters, though debut memoirists are often asked for the full manuscript.

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